When reviewing a student's essay, an advisor notices the student has focused heavily on an external event, overlooking their personal growth or learning. What feedback should the advisor prioritize?

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B) Advising them to shift the focus from merely describing the event to reflecting on its impact on their perspectives or actions.. College essays aim to reveal the student's character, values, and growth. While an external event can be a catalyst, the essay's core should be the student's internal response, reflections, and the lessons learned. Shifting focus to impact enhances self-revelation.

When reviewing a student's essay, an advisor notices the student has focused heavily on an external event, overlooking their personal growth or learning. What feedback should the advisor prioritize?

✓ Correct Answer: Option B

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