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When advising a student who describes feeling 'passionate' about a subject but struggles to convey it effectively in their essay, what technique should an advisor recommend to embody the 'show, don't tell' principle?

A Using more synonyms for 'passionate' throughout the essay.
B Including a specific anecdote that illustrates their active engagement and curiosity in the subject.
C Stating their passion more emphatically and directly at the beginning of each paragraph.
D Focusing solely on external achievements and awards related to the subject.

✓ Correct Answer: Option B

An anecdote provides concrete evidence and demonstrates passion through action, experience, and specific details, allowing the reader to infer the passion rather than merely being told about it.

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