To help a student enhance their college essay, an advisor suggests they use 'showing, not telling.' Which of the following examples best illustrates this principle?

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B) 'Despite numerous setbacks, I meticulously practiced coding algorithms for months, eventually winning the statewide hackathon.'. 'Showing' involves using vivid descriptions, actions, and specific examples to illustrate a trait or feeling, allowing the reader to infer the quality. Option B shows determination through actions and outcomes.

To help a student enhance their college essay, an advisor suggests they use 'showing, not telling.' Which of the following examples best illustrates this principle?

✓ Correct Answer: Option B

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