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An advisor notes a student's essay repeatedly states, 'I am a determined person.' Which specific advice would best help the student effectively demonstrate this trait rather than merely stating it?

A Replace 'determined' with stronger synonyms like 'resolute' or 'unwavering'.
B Provide a brief narrative showing a specific instance where your determination led to a tangible outcome.
C Add a concluding paragraph summarizing all instances of your determination.
D Ask a peer to confirm if the statement 'I am a determined person' sounds convincing.

✓ Correct Answer: Option B

'Show, don't tell' requires illustrating a trait through concrete actions, experiences, and reflections, allowing the reader to infer the quality directly.

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