🏫 College Advising

An advisor is reviewing a student's essay draft. The student asks if the advisor can 'just rewrite this paragraph to make it stronger.' What is the most ethically appropriate response for the advisor?

A Rewrite the paragraph for the student, as it's part of providing comprehensive feedback.
B Guide the student to identify weaknesses and brainstorm alternative phrasing, maintaining the student's voice.
C Tell the student to use an AI writing tool for revision.
D Suggest the student find a professional essay editor to rewrite the entire essay.

✓ Correct Answer: Option B

Advisors should facilitate the student's own writing and critical thinking process, offering guidance and feedback that empowers the student to improve their work while preserving their authentic voice and ownership of the essay.

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