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A student's draft for a college essay has exceeded the 650-word limit by 150 words. Which strategy is *least* effective for an advisor to suggest for reducing the word count while maintaining the essay's quality and personal voice?

A Eliminating redundant phrases, clichés, or overly wordy expressions.
B Cutting out entire paragraphs or sections that do not directly contribute to the main narrative or theme.
C Replacing descriptive anecdotes and specific details with brief summaries or general statements.
D Combining shorter, choppy sentences to create more concise and impactful sentences.

✓ Correct Answer: Option C

Replacing specific, descriptive anecdotes with summaries often strips an essay of its unique voice, vividness, and the 'show, don't tell' elements, diminishing its quality rather than maintaining it during reduction.

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