A student shares an essay draft with their advisor that is technically well-written but feels impersonal and uses language that doesn't sound like the student's typical voice. What is the most important advice the advisor should give?
✓ Correct Answer: Option B
Authenticity is crucial in college essays. Admissions officers want to hear the student's genuine voice, not a fabricated persona or an essay heavily edited to sound more 'academic' or 'impressive.'