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A student receives feedback that their essay's tone is too academic and lacks personality. Which strategy should the advisor recommend to help the student inject more of their authentic voice?

A Encourage the student to use more sophisticated vocabulary and complex sentence structures.
B Advise them to incorporate colloquialisms and informal language throughout the essay.
C Suggest they focus on sharing personal reflections, unique observations, and specific details from their experiences.
D Recommend imitating the writing style of essays found in successful college application guides.

✓ Correct Answer: Option C

Authentic voice comes from personal insights, unique perspectives, and sharing specific details that reveal who the student is, rather than adopting an overly formal or informal persona.

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