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A student is concerned their essay sounds too formal and unlike them. What advice should the advisor give to help the student develop a more authentic voice?

A Use more sophisticated vocabulary and complex sentence structures to impress the admissions committee.
B Imagine telling the story aloud to a trusted friend or family member, then write it down.
C Read examples of successful college essays and try to emulate their writing style.
D Focus strictly on adhering to academic essay conventions, such as avoiding contractions.

✓ Correct Answer: Option B

Imagining telling the story conversationally can help students inject their natural voice, tone, and personality into their writing, making it sound more authentic and less formal or stiff.

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